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You Deserve Better.

I'm not the type of girl for you,
you deserve better,
someone who's normal,
someone who doesn't self harm,
someone to love you better than I.

I can't make you happy,
I'm afraid to love you,
I'm scared I'll get hurt,
I'm scared you'll get hurt...

I don't deserve you,
your good looks, charm, smile...
Everything about you is amazing,
you deserve better than me,
but I don't dare tell you...

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  • serenity silvermoon
    October 22

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    this poem was sad you deserve better you need to get out you need to tell your boyfriend about your uncle and you need to stop cutting yourself i like your poetry though the only thing i miss about the things that happend to me is now my life is getting to the point were i dont remember the pain and my muse for writing is gone thank you for sharing keep up the great work


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 15

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    I cry when I read this

    Honey if someone cares for you this much and the only thing holding you back from this love is your own vision of yourself I cry .For so many can see a vibrant young girl who can have it all one who can be loved and show love .Im not talking about sexual love for sex is just something people do real love is somthing two people feel between one another the closeness the happiness the inner ove that truly counts .If someone doesnt pressure you and when you say no they understand then honey that person loves you .Take his hands and let him show you what true happiness can be he will untie your wings so you can fly again


  • darlee77
    September 12
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    You are worthy of all love. Don't be afraid to take a chance. Reach for happiness.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 6

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    I can relate to this piece so much but he loves you... you do deserve him and the reason he loves you is for you and self harming shouldnt stand in the way.
    A great write and i really liked it. Really well written. Great job!
    -Sennyo-


  • She burns
    September 5

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    he's there with you for a reason, he needs to protect you and love you...


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 5
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    Oh honey

    This is an excellent write here . And honestly I think your tops and your life is one that someone could love you and bring you this joy you so crave and love honey is the way .Never put yourself down for if you can dream it then you can make it so


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 5

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    SO TOUCHING!!!!

    This is beautiful my dear though both of you have met and like each other, that is enough. Let happen what will, and accept that you are a lovely person and deserve to be happy as he does and obviously both of you would like to be happy together. 's


  • mcope8050
    September 5
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    you deserve wonderful things,,, as does he,,,,

    what if,,,, he deserves you and you deserve him and all the growth that comes between you two is EXACTLY what you both deserve,,,, WHAT IF.... because it's scary, both of you miss out on what you deserve? Take a chance,,, be brave,,,, and dont close the door to ALL the wonderful gifts life has to offer,,,, because we fear pain/hurt,,,, that may never come to be,,,,, goodluck,,, enjoy it as it comes,,,, be brave

  • luv2dream gold member
    September 5

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    you deserve everything beautiful. of course you are scared and that is normal. Be good to yourself because you definately are a good person.

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