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Bella

i fall down in the hallways
and i don't think i fit in
but i guess its not much different
than it has always been

so clumsy and imperfect
its hard for me to see
how an angel with no halo
could possibly love me.

you left me cold and broken
and my piece of mind went too,
no one could love anything
as much as i loved you.

but then a found a buddy
who could help me through my pain
even though it hurt to ride
that harley through the rain

but then i searched for thrills,
to let me hear you once again
and i'd hate to admit it,
but i was falling for my friend.

you thought that i had killed myself,
and you went for it too,
but i found you just in time
and i once again had you.

then we went and married,
and let's just say we had a whirl,
but soon i realized, that i was going to have
our perfect little girl.

you thought she was a monter,
but i gave my life for her.
now i was just beatiful,
you really must concer.

now out in our medow,
we awaited blood and death
but none of them have figured
i shouldn't be reckoned with,

i held my own against them,
and i saved us with my sheild
no amount of knowledge, in their minds
could defeat the wepon that i weild.

we got them all to listen,
and showed them there's no threat
now us and the voltri
are all very well met.

now to think that a few years ago
i was preoccupied with essays
but now i have eternaty
with Edward and Renesmee.

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  • FearedCries
    November 12
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    Okay, this is the best twilight poem I have ever read. You definitely can write. My favorite part: you left me cold and broken
    and my piece of mind went too,
    no one could love anything
    as much as i loved you.

    Which is weird since I hated that part when it happened in the book.


  • Unbreakable3
    October 23

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    hahahaha this is a really really good poem of twilight. i generally don't like twilight related poems and stories but this is REALLY good i love the rhymign in the last stanza! essays and renesmae! haha I would have never thought of that! <3


  • Avalanche.
    October 11

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    Bella
    i fall down in the hallways
    and i don't think i fit in
    but i guess its not much different
    than it has always been

    so clumsy and imperfect
    its hard for me to see
    how an angel with no halo
    could possibly love me.

    you left me cold and broken
    and my piece of mind went too,
    no one could love anything
    as much as i loved you.

    but then a found a buddy
    who could help me through my pain
    even though it hurt to ride
    that harley through the rain

    but then i searched for thrills,
    to let me hear you once again
    and i'd hate to admit it,
    but i was falling for my friend.

    you thought that i had killed myself,
    and you went for it too,
    but i found you just in time
    and i once again had you.

    then we went and married,
    and let's just say we had a whirl,
    but soon i realized, that i was going to have
    our perfect little girl.

    you thought she was a monter,
    but i gave my life for her.
    now i was just beatiful,
    you really must concer.

    now out in our medow,
    we awaited blood and death
    but none of them have figured
    i shouldn't be reckoned with,

    i held my own against them,
    and i saved us with my sheild
    no amount of knowledge, in their minds
    could defeat the wepon that i weild.

    we got them all to listen,
    and showed them there's no threat
    now us and the voltri
    are all very well met.

    now to think that a few years ago
    i was preoccupied with essays
    but now i have eternaty
    with Edward and Renesmee.


  • xochocoholicxo
    October 5

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    this is what we call brilliant girl you crazy no one can write this good and not have it published the way you wrote it it isnt twilight its its way better i love it i really do this is just brilliant


  • Avalanche.
    September 4
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    haha

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