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White

Not gray,
nor black.
It is the cleanest,
the purest.
and thus,
easiest to smudge.

Let's not go with black, but everyone needs some passion.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • mayberrylover0502
    September 14

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    Great

    I love the easiest to smudge. It is shorter than the others, but it makes ALOT of sense. It is harder to stay pure and clean than it is to stay dark and awful, well, for some people.*ahem, ahem, LADYINTHEPINK* you know who you are...


  • YourLightWillShine
    September 10

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    Short but Meaningful

    I like this one a lot, it was written with the same good taste as the Truth, but I prefer the longer ones. However, the shorter poem that you have written here leaves me thinking and wondering about the topic. I like that you have left room for thought.

    Keep Writing,

    LadyinthePINK