Have you heard the leaves piled on the ground
on a wet November day?
Have you felt a smile spread across your face?
Have you listened what they say?
They snap! They crackle! And pop!
Like a bowl Crispy Rice.
A bowl of leaves for breakfast!
Now wouldn’t that be nice?
A contest entry
- Time to rhyme "2" by Legend.
3500 points, ended September 11, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A bowl of leaves for breakfast. Didn't they do it and call it muesli ?
You bought a smile to my face wih this one
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Always nice to be a kid again and walk through piles of leaves and listen to them whisper and crackle
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mmmm...
sounds 'leafy' l.o.l. short but humorous take on the ole school fav. cereal of mine Rice Krispies..
liked this!
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Lol, nice humour in this well penned piece of work. Light hearted and a lovely little read. Well done and good luck.
Shaz xx
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OMG
This is funny Crispy Rice O.K. you are the list and it is the I hate you list! lol this is really a great poem funny and down to earthgreat flow could add a few verses but hey whose counting here I like short poetry because it says it all in one line everything else is flowers and dimes of time! Good Luck in the contest this could be a runner up for sure! mel.
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Ule brenner?
Was that his name? The Grape Nuts dude. hehehehe... Charming minimalist verse you've penned. Humor is my friend
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Yes, that would be very nice as is your poem
Good luck in the contest...Lulu
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Wonderful I love it, this is my kind of poetry. Sets you walking one way the drags you off in a new direction Excellent I love it
Good luck in the contest
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Haha this is awesome. I like the seriousness of the first paragraph and the whole thing has a really nice flow to it. Good write.
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