A Beautiful life within my womb
A deep love in my heart
A unexpected gift
Wanted all the same
Feelings of confusion
The bond grew day by day
Heart beat heard for the first time
At that moment I became someone's mother
Not knowing what laid ahead
Images of the face unseen
Ten little fingers, Ten little toes
Lullabies luring you to sweet slumber
Butterfly kisses upon your cheek
Feelings of change unraveling
A mother's sixth sense
Hesitant to face the truth
Journey of the answer that I did not want to find
A thousand ocean cried
Author notes
THis is about when I had a miscarriage in March 2003
Written April 3rd, 2004
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KIM THIS IS A REALLY good POEM, I CANT IMAGION HOW YOU MUST OF FELT, I KNOW I COULD NOT HAVE IF SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPEND TOO ME.
LOVE YA KRYSTLE BaBiiLeXi2004 -
Thank you for your kind commetns simple illusion. THat is neat your name is kim also. thanks for commenting on my poem
~Kim -
thats such a cute poem!!! so so true i bet that is how it feels to be a mother not that i know yet though i am only 14.....your name is kim? thats really cool because my name is kim too....great job and keep writing
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Thanks Daddio this was about me. Love you
Kim -
Thank you Hannah I miss you also. Thank you for your kind comments..
Kim -
Thank you confessions the poem was about me losing a child it was very emotional thank you for your kind comments
~kim -
Beautiful Kim. Written with great feeling and maybe about yourself.
Your Dad -
that wwas a good poem kim i really wish you would have stayed with josh and was living with us again i miss you alot but what would have happened if you hadnt of lost it that would make things worse between you two but i really wish that it didnt happen and you would have gotten to be a mother well great poem miss you keep writing your great at it
love,
Hannah -
that was really good...you put in feeling and at the beginning the girl foundout that she was going to be a mother and she was all excited and you showed that, but then at the end it talks about loseing the baby and she expressed that too...you did and awesome job! keep up your good work
-Amanda
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