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We are Done

the memories of our past make me smile
sometimes i miss the good old days
but then I realize who i was really with
I did cry but only for a while
now the rage builds up inside
you should have been grateful to have me
I stooped to my lowest 
and even got embarrassed to be with you
I gave you my heart and soul
and even tried my hardest
I tried to make you feel better about yourself
but that never worked and you still were a looser
is it really worth it to cry today? I think not
we are done as said by you

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  • blank1 silver member
    September 26
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    another amazing poem that i can really relate to,keep them coming darlin,looking forward to more


  • AngelWithNoWings
    September 8

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    This is beautifull,
    I am going through this exact thing at this point in time.
    Well done.
    Jezz


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 5

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    This is very well written and portrayed my friend I know how this feels as I have been in this place before!!!!! Your emotion is very well expressed!!!!! Well done!!!!