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Twenty Years of Blissfulness

Twenty years ago on a moonlit night
Requesting from my love
Will you marry me?

The alluring moon
Shining upon her
Beaming with a glowing smile
Simply, saying yes was her style.

Three children later
Puppy in toll
Thanking the Creator
For the life He has bestowed.

Life is absolute
With this family of mine
Job of head-master
Is so divine.

Darling, love you more
Than I did yesterday
Feeling bless with the one I adore
This old guy is here to stay.

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY DARLING!!!!!

  Brian






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  • Lulu Gee silver member
    November 12
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    This is so lovely and sincere...Great, hope she loved it.
    Lu


  • humblpye gold member
    October 4

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    Hello Brian, it's good to see your poems displayed, from remembering the story you told to me some time ago I can fully appreciate the depth of this poem, I am happy for you my friend and for all the encouragement you have given me...
    Ah, to love, and to be loved! what can possibly be more precious in this life
    may all your days be blessed
    John


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 27

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    "Love you more than I did yesterday" welcome words indeed to hear from a spouse, as you have written...Glad to read your write here, Brian...Keep the praise coming ...it is welcome for the rest of us!