For long I thought Vernal went away
somehow felt her presence near
Than suddenly came the messages
filling me with deep fear…
A letter directly addressed to me
I found here in my hall
Glued letters on white paper
with words I won’t recall…
Phone calls at night and nobody talking
made my skin feel icy and cold
The cops I called to report it
only placed me on their hold
Those silent moments in between
just made my mind run free
Away for years back as a stalker
and the chosen one was me…
I called my Partners for some help
they promised to stick around
From that very moment on
the Vernal I once knew,
disappeared and was never found…
Author notes
Vernal Bloom's crime : Stalking
Note to Vernal: Please try to visit me as much as you can the next coming year!!!
Promisse..???????
In a list
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Contest by Partners In Crime.
1100 points, ended September 24, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Being stalked by Vernal Bloom.....
Comments
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What a write! You are so brilliant.
A very good message here as well.
It is so easy to let life get in the
way of living! I hope all is going
well for you. Congratulations on
winning the Bronze.
Jeannie
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I get it. :)
Partners in crime.
very good with message staying in touch with friends.
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You can always count on your partners for help when needed...This is a very good piece...good luck in the contest...
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O' how absolutely adorable dear heart...
you have made me smile, and reminded me just how precious time really is and we should always stay ever so close to those whum we care aboutwuvs you so much dear sister
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Yes - All chocolate -- You have your wish. ---- Thank you.
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I feel as though this personally relates to me. The silences between are real enough as is the stalking, or perhaps I'm taking things to literal. I prefer not to think of it that way as it draws me in with familiarity of emotion, one I can't hide nor seem to escape.
Never received a letter, never received a call, just the emptiness of a promise repeatedly made and broken like a skipping record; like fingernails scraping across my heart.
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Isn't this what people are good at??
Making promises and than brake them??
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Yes
Or so it would seem. Trust is a commidity more precious than anything labeled 'precious', and just as easily tarnished.
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Oh hun! This filled my heart with painful tears! How can I forget a wolfie girl with a heart of gold! This year, I'm going to stay in touch hopefully and I'll peep here and there and will try to catch you in your lines. And I also hope the end of your story is not the end of my life's story!
By the way, you wrote one of those good mysterous write, I have to print it and read it on days of nostalgia to remember how reach I was between my partners.
I wish you best of luck
~Massy~
PS. I love the pic so much!
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I think if we're very patient and persistant we can get Massy back on the right track and save her from the pennitentary. She's really a sweet girl at heart.
I bet she'll make a good stalker, though. Wolfie, you can say you've been stalked by the best
And, yes, us Partners In Crime are always willing to help out a fellow partner
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Hugs, darling aunt! For your kind words ever
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Lol great write!! =D I love the air of mystery, but what happened when you showed up to consult your partners . . . and found she was a NEW MEMBER! Le Gasp!!!!!!!
Good Job & Good Luck!!
-Katie
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HMmmmmmmmm
Someone should warn Vernal that Wolf of her's is ''VICIOUS""
ED.
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo........
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Story - We wan't a Dutch treat.
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I prefer chocolate Sir W
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Me, too... but she's my AP neice so try to keep her out of jail
Dee
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I promisse.....
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!! I'm excited, thanks for reserving!!!!
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Thnxs for the cool option...
Are you ready to read...????
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Can't wait for the story
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You can come back now Girly....I forgave you your crime....
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