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Yes, I changed.






 

Have learned the art of pretence so well
Now even the cry of my soul sounds fake.

Hypocrisy was what I hated the most
Hypocrite is what I have been made.

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    October 17

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    Love the last two lines! Wonderful take on the picture prompt! I wish there was more to the write. I didn't want to stop reading. Nicely penned!

    Safely hidden within her fantasies,

    ~ Dreamer With Dreams


  • Hikari Lady
    September 6

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    Such sadness in your words, so much to feast upon and ponder. The last two lines were wonderfully penned. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 5

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    Ooooh, this is a really good one,
    wonderully penned indeed.
    All the best.

    Ken