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Counting Sheep? I Think Not. Counting Lost Souls Of Course. Twenty Of Them

1.You!
2.Yes, you.
3.Gaze with me,
4.Into my mind.
5.A world of shadows,
6.And mazes of all kinds.
7.Do try not to get lost here.
8.You may never be seen again.
9.Those lost may not find themselves again.
10.Lost forever in a world of mad thoughts.
11.If I get lost here, how do you stand a chance?
12.To be lost in you own mind can be dangerous.
13.To be lost in another's mind is down right deadly.
14.To be lost in my mind is especially hazardous.
15.So I dare you to take a trip through my forest of fairies.
16.Take a flight through galaxies of aberrational dark dreams.
17.Go on a tour of the deep caves of beastly, wild, violent, impulse.
18.Do try to avoid getting lost in the twisting maze of wandering thoughts.
19.Do you truly believe that you can survive this chaotic ensnaring place?
20.If so, then good luck and fare thee well on your journey and watch your step and good bye.

Author notes

Try counting he syllables of each line.

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  • jerry1
    November 26
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    Brilliant. I actually figured out the syllable counting before I read the author notes. I love the idea. Great read, really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.


  • Katja Hochlan
    November 19
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    Meow ^_^ .. very.. interesting ^_^ lol I like this randomism that is definatly you ^_^