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Paper Planes

Been flying paper planes again
But, one's gone missing this time around
Its the one with your name on it
The one we made together
And it flew away
Just like you did

Ive been away for a while
But, not anymore
Ive come to realize what
I know I I didn’t understand before
So I'm going to fly
Just like you did

It all makes sense
So                clear
Its a beautiful thing
When I come to terms with
You . Flying away
Just Like you did

Author notes

thank you swim.x for jogging me into writing something i was getting lazy

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 5

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    Wonderful metaphor used here. It really is a lovely piece. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for taking part in my special contest for my wonderfully special family!


  • swim.x
    September 7

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    oh it's alright

    it's good, last lines of each stanza = awesome because they were the same and i was like.. dayum yeah you do that because he's a bastard but you can punch him in the face

    please excuse the nonsensical comments, it's late.

    xx