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faintly...

something...
vanishes into thick ether,
swimming ripple-less.

faintly,
from far away,
the drumbeats of onam.

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Onam is the spring festival of the people of Kerala, my State, in India. It is the time of family reunion. This time it was on September 3 (it changes by a few days from year to year by English calendar, since we follow the Malayalam calendar).

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