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first night with her

we walk to her house,
quiet as a mouse,
don't make any noise,
i tell her softly,
under the bridge,
through the tunnel,
were almost there,
its late at night,
pitch black with only our cell phones light,
guiding our way,
so we finaly get there,
its early in the morning,
and were on the couch,
shes walking to a room,
and i follow,
she opens the door,
and teases me with her eyes,
my heart fly's,
till im high from her smile,
she sits on the bed,
i do the same,
and slowly but quickly i touch my lips to hers,
and surprisingly she dosent pull back,
but instead she stays ware shes at,
i drag my fingers accross her face,
and im loving the taste,
of her lips,
time flys by,
and before i know it,
i wake up,
still shes next to me,
sleeping,
shes so cute,
so beautiful,
and the nigh ends with a kiss goodnight,
<3

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  • morphis78
    November 9

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    Awesome

    that's a pretty flippinf sweet poem....it has alot of emotion behind it...I really like it


  • Pop-ArtGuitar
    November 9

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    awww, such sweet imagery, you have a talent for this


  • vampireintherain
    November 5

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    WoW brilliant I love it! it had lots of feeling! Good job!


  • Xxcant runxX
    October 20
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    wow incredable love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • emoangel22
    September 13
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    this is very good

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