Seeing you, the shadows accentuate your shape
Trying to look away, but I’m drawn in
Edging closer, trying to remain aloof
Approaching, and shyly looking away
Anticipating that first sweet touch
Lips parting, breath catching, hands trembling
Reaching out, tasting and savoring
Chocolate cake at midnight
A contest entry
- Midnight Quickie by Hope Angel.
525 points, ended October 13, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Haha, I like this one a lot. I think any woman can agree with what you wrote here. Good luck in the contest.
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Heh, it's a cute poem... and it's an appropriate length. I'm sure I would have stretched this out into 12 stanzas and hit every possible chocolate and sexual connection possible, but this one has strength in its brevity.
Also, where have you been lately?
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