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Strong

I urge every second to be with you
to hold me like you once did
for me to feel like you where still there
i crave for there to be more emotion
more comunication becasue im scared
you should be there for me and i dont know if you will be there for me
some one so great and yet I wonder still...
out of fear, out of being hurt before,
about you breaking my heart,
So many deep feelings and i haven't got a clue
I'm losing my mind on what i should do
I know one thing, I really miss you
tear stains down my eyes
I wish you where near
Because being with you makes me not fear
But I'll sit here waiting for you
As long as you promise to do the same

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  • kirsten.
    September 4, 2009
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    I like this.
    It tells how you REALLY feel, without all the big words, and complex sentences.
    It's real, and sad.
    I love it.