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Just to be Different

J.ohn's     just    jinxed      to     be       juxtapose.D                                    
 u.naffiliated, unbearably  unjust, unknown like una.i
 s.elf-sacrifice  for society?  So surely  NOT  mysel.f 
  t.ough, tears that tumble tenuously as total proo.f         
T.abooed,  tactful,  I stay true with a touch of tast.e 
 o.ptimistic, organic, obedient  and  an odd  outgoe.r   
B.rutish  yet  beautiful,  boastful,  but I try to behav.e 
 e.ntirely eccentric, ego for eons! encoded as differe.n

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                                                                                 . 

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Hardest thing I ever tried to do! I'm done with it, frustrated it didn't work how I thought, but here it is.. just to be different

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  • Miss Macabre
    September 10

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    Hehe, this does look pretty damn hard. I like this poem, it's very unique. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • crawlingkingsnake
    September 10
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    different alright nice work

  • Miss Macabre
    September 10
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    Please space your name out in the AN.


  • mitchybaby
    September 7

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    Impressive

    Such a difficult style to write and you did it, with alliteration!! Blow my mind. This is truly an impressive piece, I couldn't write it if my life depended on it.


  • SkitzoSkittlez
    September 4

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    >_<

    this is awesome... i have never seen anything like it.. it's wonderful, really!


  • lunasongnightwolf
    September 3

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    I LOVE IT!!!

    it's so brilliant!! i could NEVER even attempt something like this!! it's a masterpiece!! it's original, smeared with your personal style!! i love it!!! you never cease to blow me away with your work, john!!! it's different and amazing and totally you!! wow!! i'm just gonna end up repeating myself over and over again, so i'm gonna stop!! it's really hard to describe something that's so amazing, complex, intriguing, and poetic genius!!! it's a brilliant work, john!!! and major kudos for even tackling it and more kudos for succeeding!!!

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