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Time flies.

Her empty nest, still perched

on that bough of love

with hopes of spring

when maybe the winds of winter

will bring back her brood.

 

 

The warmth of Summer

blooms reveries of laughter and song

when first they took flight

in the contenment of childhood skies

as they swirled and twirled

beneath her protecting wings...

 

 

 

But her sharpened eyes

catch view of the future

when, like her she made a nest

to incubate her family,

then so will they...

 

 

Then time will fly

seasons pass by and before

she realises it,

her wings are clipped

and she has to

feathered her own nest

for winter. 

 

 

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My family are growing too quickly, one has left already and i miss him so much.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    September 12

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    This is a lovely description of a mother raising a family and then watching them go only to begin another next year. I have watched this so many times over the years with birds which nested in trees in our yard.


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 9

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    Time to let go...I know its hard to do, we all have to. But the great thing about when they leave, they learn so much more. The things we taught them when they were little always stay, but grow.

    Great penning my friend. It has been a long time since I have read your poems. Glad I stoppped by.

    ~Sie


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 4

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    From the mouth of a mamma dove...

    Time does fly, and like love, it always comes back around to us, with welcoming arms and an open heart. Best of luck in the contest!!
    Loves ya,
    xx Cyn xx


  • WhisperingSpirit
    September 4

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    Thank you for entering your beautiful words.
    Oh so often how we wish we would could have them small
    forever.
    I love your words and how you have put them together with
    birds.
    I wish you the best of luck in our contest.


  • crivanea silver member
    September 3

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    awwww..such a beautiful write to this piece..so full of heartfelt words..and i love the extended metaphor..i have a bookmark that says...empty nest...full life lovely piece..best wishes


  • Cannonsfire
    September 3

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    He will always fly back when he needs his mum C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 3

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    NIcely told tale of losing the fledglings... but beware of the boomerangs, LOL
    IWe had one, but didn't mind. worked out well, like your poem here.

    Buddy

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