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Yue,a girl,no,An Albino Moon...

An infants first cry,a girl.
She is perfect,like the moon.
Her name,Yue for the moon godess.
Her skin,so soft and white.
Like and Albino Moon,that she is.
Her eyes like the moon as well,her hair white and pure.
She steps forward now a women,only to outshine the moon she was named for.
An Albino Moon,Yue the girl from a village of normal people.
She stood out,though not badly at all.
A godess,among her people.
An angel,sent from the godess of her name.
Yue,a girl,no,An Albino Moon...

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Prompt:
-Against an albino moon

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 4

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    oh...teh name yue..that's japanese for moon right? this is really nice..i like how you took it..and you didn't use Luna clever good take on the prompt..best wishes