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Blink

If you blink
then you'll miss me
if you think
then you'll hate me
i wish
i weren't so scarce
i wish i could look
at you and not just see
another disapproving face
trying to blink me away.
if you blink me away
you're gonna miss that day
i found you crying so i said "hey
just you blink those tears away.
whats got you so upset?
he's not worth it i'd bet"
i comfort you
i thought you'd comfort me too.
i gave you a shoulder
to cry on
i gave you hope you could
fly on
i didn't care when you were lying,
i just cared that you were trying,
so be the sister to my brother,
let us love one another
yet again.
and
please
don't
blink

my little sis(AMY)

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  • PurpleSkyJuliet
    September 5
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    Chasers =D I love you brooooo, Finally you're back on AP

    Good job on this one, I like it.