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Perfection Doesn't Cut It

I try to be perfect for you
But I just can't with the things
I've been put through
If only there weren't any broken hearts
And lives that aren't falling apart
Then maybe I could be
But I just don't see that type of thing
Happening to me
And I won't try again
Because nothing will be proven
And I'll end up back where I used to be
With a broken heart
And a wrist bleeding
So until then I'll sit and cry
With only thoughts of suicide
Nothing but a razor at my side
But what will be left after the night ends
A suicide note Saying
''I love you, and I'll miss you
My parents, my friends...''

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