My guilt drives me on
When I know I can not go any further
All that I live for
Haunts my every move
All that I am fearful of
Haunts my every day
How can I be that man
When I am ashamed
I am broken and lost
I am beyond compassion
I do not long for tomorrow
Every birthday that come and goes
Is one more year I long for
Until I reach that end
Where I do not have to wake up
Each morning is a reminder
Why I am living
That life I wish I could end
Guilt’s they are the vain of my world
I thought my regents were bad
But nothing compares to me
Like the guilt’s that keep me down
And haunt my every move
If I could end my life I would
But what about my family
And what about my friends
Could I be this heartless
And forsake them in my hour
Well maybe I will
And maybe I wont
What do you think?
Maybe that time has come
Maybe, maybe!
what do you think?
is it ever that bad?
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ok, that was very good and very heartfelt. What I need you to do now is imagine someone you love having this same guilt and write to them telling them why they should not feel guilty. After all, that's what the contest is about. This is really a good write though, just not the type needed for this contest.
Please do not respond until contest is over and judged, just resubmit. Thank you and good-luck -
Sad reflections of ones life, for guilt ridden be he or she who falls into that place where reflecting can lead to darkness. You ask ''is it ever that bad'', answer is both yes and no. Depending on where you stand on the plank of death, and as long as you are still there, on it, you can come back. Whatever guilt one carries can be addressed if the desire is strong enough. You did well here with the prompt, take care and the best of luck to you in this contest here.
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