your one foot in the grave,
always under the gun,
tell me why be saved?
everywhere you go,
no matter the truth,
no matter the rules,
anywhere and everywhere you go,
"you are never alone"
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Strike A Nerve Make Them Bleed
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Take The Curve Break Your Creed
always gotta be dark and despair,
a dark cloud hangs around your head,
rain follows your every move,
waking up to a feeling of dread.
im sick of the color black,
tired of picking up the slack,
remember anywhere you go,
you were never alone!
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Strike A Nerve Make Them Bleed
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Take A Curve Break Your Creed
A contest entry
- Rhyme,Lyrics, Prose, Dirty Pretty. by Antebellum.
800 points, ended September 24, 290 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow power here
Congrads on your Gols it looked to be a winner to me to then I realized the contest was over and yep I was right lol mel. Great Powm I really enjoyed the wording and the way you put it all into place and spce .mel.
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It makes me want to dance :3 I like it!
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well deserved gold.
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Sweet; I like this a lot. It's memorable and it flows very nicely. My favorite lines:
waking up to a feeling of dread.
im sick of the color black,
tired of picking up the slack
Keep writing, this is awesome
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I really like this.
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Strike A Nerve Make Them Bleed
Your Not The Anti-Hero
You Are The Number One Zero
Take The Curve Break Your Creed
this makes me wanna dance. heh.
thanks for entering
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