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A Battle Won

Oh beautiful light
that shines on such a treacherous night
protector of Angels and Gods
please do tell me what are the odds
that you would be mine
a sister, a friend so divine
I wallow in self destruction
while you work on my construction
we play, we fight
oh what a plight...

Oh beautiful light
that shines on such a treacherous night
protector of Angels and Gods
please do tell me what are the odds
that you would see me for me
and forgive the faults you see
with you it's always a loving hand
forsaking nothing, for all is grand
I love you for you too
and everything you do...

Forget me not when my time is done
realize this, our battle is won...!

Dedicated to my sister Jocasta Stephenson

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 15
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    Beautiful tribute to someone who sounds like a very special person. Nice write here.