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Forever Shattered

You dont understand,
The pain I have been through.
The tears I have shed,
All for you.
I was falling hard Danny.
I liked you.
Mistake.

You backstabbed,
and shattered my small little heart.
I cant forgive you.
Ever.
You cheated.
And lost the game.
Its over- I am over.
My pain is burning through.
But the question is
do i love you too?
No!


Why do hate me?


Wanna hurt me so bad?
Congratulations-
you won.
I will never heal.
Oh Danny,
the way I feel.

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True story. My forst real boyfriend. Gone. Sooo much anger!

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  • KiWi-
    October 15

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    Had the same thing with my first girlfriend. She broke up with me after 6 months and never gave me a reason. Was dating a new guy in a week, and I had never done anything wrong.


    • In.Your.Arms
      October 15
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      aww im sorry. well than that chick is a tool, and shes missing out. now you know she wasnt even worth it.


  • NyteShade
    October 9

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    Can relate.It sucks when it happens but trust me you will heal in time even if you don't think you will. I'm sure you will find someone who doesn't cheat or lie to you and will make you happy.


  • Grey.Area.
    October 6
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    Intense emotion, and well constructived. This is a genuinely good poem


  • Borntowriteforever
    September 8

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    I'm sorry. But thats why they call them "first boyfriend". You will heal in time.
    (Please dont get mad at me for saying this) But you will find someone much better who will treat a hundred times better.


  • barelyXbreathing
    September 4
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    This sucks. I am sooo mad at sam and danny. They crushed your heart. They had no right


  • BlackRimmedEyes
    September 4
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    :'(
    sorry baby sis.
    ily.
    dont hate me!!!

  • Dying Youth
    September 3

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    Yes, men are jerks. But dont give up now. Usually the person you spend the rest of your life with shows when you arent looking and least expect it.

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