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Battle Within

[Verse 1]
If I tried to do this all on my own
I'd become all the things that I loathe

To look up, all I do is stare down
No one knows it's much worse than it sounds

[chorus]
I won't be taken in
This isn't where it ends
It calls out for my name
It wears my body thin

But I'm in your hands
And I can't take a chance
You give me the strength
That I need to stand

[verse 2]
And she stands, standing ever so strong
The war she served.Now its been passed on

So I break at her shadowed pain
shattered glass can never feel the same

[chorus]
I won't be taken in
This isn't where it ends
It calls out for my name
It wears my body thin

But I'm in your hands
And I can't take a chance
You give me the strength
That I need to stand

[closing verse]
I need you to save me
The rain doesn't drown out
The pain within my veins

Your voice I hear clearly
It brings back the feeling
It tells me this can't be restrained.

Author notes

Its about anorexia, and my fight through it.

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  • anawarfare
    September 6
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    two words LOVE IT!!
    wonderful write. I think you did an amazing job!
    ..and just wow!