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My wish

My wish
is for
the little kids
to be safe.

Author notes

Its the truth keep the kids safe from child molesters

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 2, 2009

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    What a wonderful wish. I too have this wish as well, and wish that each person on Earth knew it to be as real as you have written it here. This brevity is filled with power. Great!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Desire gold member
    September 22, 2009

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: My wish
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
    I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
    You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
    Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
    Woven Strengths: Wow~ While digesting Your words~ I kept being shown
    how there are different ways to be safe and how laws need to be tougher
    on predators who continue to prey on children
    Sadly there are many out there who spend most of their time...
    planning ways to hurt another...
    However that is to be Interpreted.
    You give the Reader much to think about
    Love the direction You took with this prompt
    Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth

    Your words grabbed and pulled~
    Vivid Imagery poured in 33 Letters or less...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~