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Passing of Love"s Time

There will never be a perfect world until the passing of time
But your perfect for a man like I
You shine like a sunset sublime

You're gorgeous as a priceless pearl of the deep sea
I don't know what God was thinking when he meant you for me
All I know is that if we're close or far
That our love will glimmer like the Great North Star

You may think I'm talking like a fool
But I hope you love me just as much as I do you

Author notes

its just something i made up cuz i was bored my mind started to wander so i begin to write things with some feeling so if you dont what it is about but im pretty sure you all i know is that i know what it means and that is all that matters

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  • This was good and rather interesting.

    Overall this was great. Keep up the good work.