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Life (a thought of sucide)

Life! What a laugh.
How about a little
more death
in this f*ck*d up world.
I've been here before,
and here I am again
thinking about
all that the world
has done.
A little line
and it could
all be gone.
A couple of pills
and I could be
so high
I wouldn't
feel a thing.
Abuse! What a joke.
No one cares.
No one hears
your cries.
You're nothing special.
You're nothing new.
They've heard it before.
Death,
an answer to to my pain.
God! What a lie.
They say God is great.
God is good.
Tell me
why all the pain.
Tell me
why all the IDIOTS.
To get back at the savior.
To get back at them all.
I will commit a crime,
and take a life.
That life...
My own...

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  • Alt
    November 4
    Edit | Reply
    very good poem. I like it a lot.

  • grumpybear
    October 8
    Edit | Reply
    Hey. I totally get where ur coming from . i have been here b4. B strong. i know u can pull thru.

  • understood. i really see where you're coming from. stick it out, it can only get better from here..... i hope