Waves of emotions crash upon
high tide markings of a flesh beach.
Swirling tongue brings the prediction of gale
force energies at play.
Oh, how the Gods and man will play tonight!
Minute tendrils of heated moisture
trickle with the promise of maybe,
delicately raising the danger level to yellow.
Oh, come my gathering storm!
Storm clouds surround
molten island, gently gathering strength,
as fingers quest for a cavern of hidden wonders.
Plundering tongue strikes
an icy blow as it surges against glistening flesh,
lashed down for protection against tropical forces.
A taste of lust hints at the rapturous future to come.
Explosive landing brings active volcano to momentary life.
Devouring all that lies within the path,
as ashes of storm-tossed passion
fall together entwined with lover's gasping breaths.
Yet, this serenity is only the eye of heaven's passionate wrath,
slowly abating, leaving the body replete
with the beauty and awaiting
for rest of the whirling gale that brings
such cyclonic, but sultry devastation.
Author notes
Hurricane: noun
1. a violent, tropical, cyclonic storm of the western North Atlantic, having wind speeds of or in excess of 72 mph (32 m/sec). Compare tropical cyclone, typhoon.
Sorry this took so long! I have been sick and out of town for most of these last two weeks. I just finished it last night.
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge (Round 3) by Corvus Corone.
600 points, ended October 5, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your entry. MK decided to restart the challenge so I am judging this as a normal contest.
I found this a pleasure to read. A well developed use of the prompt word and word bank. You use your words well to build up the passion to a stormy crescendo.
Well done
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I like this, I like the comparison to storms. Although this is a longish poem, it didn't seem it, you neither have too much or too little. I can feel the passion building, as it does in reality, good show, I say.
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So very passionate and so very well done...wow!
Love this!
Wishing you the very best in this challenge
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What outstanding metaphors, the imagery with each passing line divine kept my attention, and from the title, from the end of the poem, it is an awesome piece, and I really enjoyed it lots!
Thank you so much for sharing, and I thought it hight time I got a chance to get over an read your works once again my friend! 
Keep on penning on dear one! 
Peace, and much love, Timothy
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Wow1 I love the way you wrote form the word prompt! the poem was like a hurricane...excellent entry and much luck to you!
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Wow, very intense & deep
I will need to read this again to absorb all of its grandeur! Well written!
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I fell passion in the peace good luck in your contest this is fell written the words flow together perfectly just rolls of the tongue as if its meant to be there this had me inspired as well as amazed keep you pen flowing and never give up no matter what others say.
~Stormy Days~
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