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she used autumn leaves
                           as parchment
and wrote about
the sound of silence
        on Palatino Hill

she traced old veins

and let ink smudge
and blend with ginger

she imagined a leaf
held new wisdom between
            each tip and curve

and the deeper she sank
into fawn coloured paper

the easier it would be to


                            let go

 

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prompt: (image) "Autumn" by Mairreadd

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 21

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    Wow what a beautifully abstract
    piece you've woven together
    so cleverly here.. such soft and
    vivid visuals throughout, as well
    as lasting definition.

    Loved this.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • alpPDCjr12
    September 6
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    Sounds great But I love autumn so it's easy to win me that way...

  • J Macabre gold member
    September 4

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    Hmmm...again your writes leave one wondering just what you are talking about and feeling in this. Maybe reminiscing? Another inspiring write by you. Brilliant.


  • sinfull
    September 4

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    Impressive

    A very contempory pen that steps just slightly away from the box. I love the poetic phrase in this and the visual is quaint. Very well-written.


  • Randomly Beautiful
    September 3
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    I loved this. The flow, and breaks were spot on. I wouldn't change a thing. Great poetry, my friend.


  • The Drifter
    September 3

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    A beautiful write. I have seen the fall leaves in New England and the are magnificent.
    Different things can be points of meditation, bring it on about easier. Where decisions can be born.


  • emma...
    September 3
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    wow, this is beautiful :]

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