"Don't take this wrong, you're just not pretty enough to date".
I sat there thinking to myself, wow I guess he's right,
so I just put my head down and didn't bother to fight.
My heart was crushed, my pride was killed,
all from a guy, with very few skills.
His hands on my body, giving in once again,
he smiles and finishes with a kiss, says "I'm glad we're friends".
Friends with benefits, another name for a whore,
he says he doesn't want me, but always comes back for more.
Why do I let him use me? it only makes me cry,
I know he'll end up leaving, just like every other guy.
Maybe one day I'll be good enough, pretty enough, to date,
or maybe I'll end up alone, maybe that's just my fate.
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**IMPORTANT NOTE**
yes i realize knowly letting a guy use me is my own fault. i know this. im working on not letting it happen. i only write the poem to get the feeling out so please dont be cruel.
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This will sound harsh. This sounds like date rape without the date.
An intense poem which stirs intense feelings in me, as a Mom.
I really wish I could match you up with my son, who's intensely shy, at 18 he has had only 1 GF, and she dumped him. He's cute, too. He would be thrilled to date you.
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in a way it made me feel like i was raped, only i hated myself even more because i let it happen.
your son souds like a great guy which is odd for guys my age.
thank you so much for commenting
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what can I say?
firstly...great poem,very well written and you wrote this as therapy which is very mature....secondly...I'd really like to meet this fool....I'm gobsmacked at his comment.....please please please pay no heed to his shallow mind -
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thank you so much for your comment
when i wrote this i was so sure he was right and it crushed me. but im stronger now and learning not to listen to idiots
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excellent
great news,may your strength and learning continue to increase...in a less painful manner hopefully ;0)
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Wow. This is pretty sad but it also shows the perfect reason for why most women think guys are players (or whatever the word is for it). What's even worse is there are too many guys that are like this. Personally I wish you wouldn't have to go through something like this, because no one should ever be told those words in the quotation you posted, it's rediculous. But a very good poem none-the-less.
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it sucks that some guys are like this, even more that they give good guys a bad rep. thank you so much for commenting
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Awwwwwwww
this is so sad. You know your worth more and better than that.
i want to give big cuddle and tell you all the things you need to hear. beat the boys with big sticks
beautifully written with real feeling, still makes me sad
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thank you so much im learning that im better and that i deserve better, just takes time.
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aww i know how you feel.....not personally but i can empathise with this poem alot...
it happens to everyone though once in their life....and as for guys ther all BASTARDS!! iv met too many and theyv all been the same
i dont bother wasting my time with them i actually stick to being friends..unless am drunk and sumthin happens by mistake but you know... lol
anyhow great write! keep it up!
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haha i love your honesty about the being drunk part, i know that waaay too well! thanks for the comment
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once again totally relate. nice job
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I am all for you, dear...Those kind come a dime a dozen...Don't believe their lies....You are a prize that goes to the one most deserving of you that shows you respect.
A rhyming poem that is for every girl that thinks she is not worthy of the right kind of treatment and love...Because I know!
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thank you so much
your comment made me smile so much
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a guy who says you aren't pretty enough
for him is a superficial asshole who is unworthy of all the incredible gifts you have to offer. Obviously, you are pretty enough to arouse him...so its his problem, could it be he wants a trophy on his arm who is bubbled-headed and too dumb to challenge him, and simply to impress others because of some defect in him, not man enough, so he worries what other people think more than how he might feel? Sensitive and sad and beautiful write poet.
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and in my head i know that, i just cant seem to get that knowledge to my heart.
as always, thank you for an amazing comment
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first line is sad, but interesting so far so good
I like how the lines flow its very nice
I really like this a poem and I'm sorry guys are using you it's their fault to just stay strong and keep moving on everything will turn out all right in the end
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the first line is more of a quote since its what he said to me after the first time we hooked up...
thank you so much for your encouraging comment. it really means a lot to me.
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People let others use them when they want to feel needed or loved. When really it does the opposite. It isn't totally your fault, it's his too. It is never right for a guy to use a girl like that, or vice versa. But you DO have the power to say NO. That's all it takes. I know it may be hard, but he doesn't want you for you. When he askes you again just look him in the face and say, "Fuck you." and walk away.
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I think thats the part that bothers me the most, I know why i let him use me. i know what im looking for and i know i wont find it in him and yet...i keep letting it happen. i think im going to take your advice tho thank you so much for the comment
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