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My Heaven

The heat in my body rises
as thoughts of your beautiful body
ravage my mind and soul
That wicked smile spreads across my lips
oh you know the one I speak of
Shivers run through me
I can still feel your soft hands
all over me as yet another tremor
runs through my already shaking body
Your eyes tracing a path of your intent
My hunger grows as I can still feel
my mouth on your soft skin
I start with your beautiful neck
Then move on to those soft lips,
work my my way down to your full breasts
Stopping there to savor them
moving on I slide down
tracing with my lips a path over your stomach
Lingering there for just a bit
Finally i make it to my final destination
My heaven, my breath catches as my mouth
slowly closes over your beautiful wet pussy
Your moans drift up to meet the angels above


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For my Baby

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 18

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    Okay, I've covered Pastel's eyes & am blushing brightly at our intrusion as we slowly retreat from the room... Coffee's in the pot, dinner's in the dog & ciggies by the ashtray... We'll pop back later... Lol!
    Seriously though Sis, a wonderful piece of writing...
    Soft, sensual narrative full of love & passion with such depth & imagery that captivates throughout...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • PastelMoons gold member
    September 17

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    Aaaah!! I feel like I just walked in on you two
    LOL This is a lovely write!
    Thanks for sharing!
    Love you both!



    ~Pastel


  • Lexie - gold member
    September 3

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    Mmmmmm baby

    I remember every touch, every kiss, every second together two bodies moving as one, two Minds locked in love and passion, Ummmm this was a trip to heaven indeed baby, thank you my love


    • Firequeen
      September 3
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      hehe well i am glad you enjoyed.
      I even left a little giggle in it for you
      You are very welcome my love

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