You don’t even have to bother me
You don’t have to explain to me
In simples words
You could not describe how I feel
You don’t have to care anymore
don’t bother me
I am not that person anymore
That person has died
I loved
I lived for you
But look at me now
Come on take one good look at me
I have to face
A world without that love
A world without caring
Not that I have made loving
Second best to my hate
Come on look at me now
I have nothing left inside
What? now you are afraid
To look into my eyes
And face that love you killed
To see that love drained from me
Well that’s what I have to face alone
So don’t bother me now
I’m already gone
And that person is not coming back
You killed that love inside
Only to watch that life drain away inside
You killed me slowly
Enjoying every moment I cried
Every pain I cried for you
But yet you stood there
Amused by my ruin
I cried out for you
But you just stood there
I begged you for mercy
But you gave me nothing in return
you gave me more through pain
I suffered in silence
But still you hated me more
You broke everything that I was
And still you were not happy with that
I had to suffer and suffer
I had to suffer more
You could only care for me in death
Only to love me when you took my last breath
Only then did you cry those tears for me
How you hated me
How I loved you
In that final breath
With those last tears
You found that heart To love me
In my silence, what I was died in you
And now you cry for my innocence you took from me
But you don’t have to bother no more
Because I left that silence for you
I have those tears in you
Now you cry those tears in me
I’m already gone now
By my lover in silence
Who took my innocence
By my hater in life
Who shed those tear of love in my death
Only to love me more
When you took my last breath
Only now do you know, how I loved you more
So tell me who got the last laugh
Now that you are dying inside
Now you can only imagine that dying look in my eyes
But imagine this my love
Before you days come to an end
You wont see me crying for you
I will always laugh last
So who is crying more now?
Who,who,who? yes you
Now suffer in the cradle of my love
Now you feel my pain tenfold
Now you have past that threshold
I hope you die and suffer like I did
who will last laugh?
Oh sorry! that will be my love
Author notes
Prompt-don’t bother, I’m already gone
You have not suffered enough yet you BASTARD!!
A contest entry
- Dark Options... by voodoo ink.
1750 points, ended September 8, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If you died today, what legacy would you leave behind? by Vhoori.
700 points, ended September 12, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this
When I made my contest, I wanted people to tell me who they were and how they would be remembered...
And with this poem, I have found that you are a very talented poet who has harbored alot of pain and has took alot of crap from someone who just wanted to hurt you, and after the last time that you had anything to do with him, you left him with the memory of all your pain that he had caused you. I hope he suffers more, and I hope he suffers well. The legacy you would leave behind for this jerk is the lesson that he needed to learn. Thank you for your entry and good luck on the contest!
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Almost a little too long for my very short attention span...
I like it, and I like that you used the title as inspiration, instead of the title, nicely written!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Thank you so much.. it was kind of long yes
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Beautiful this is. Now just tell me are you in this much pain really? (I feel your pain)
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I can not say, I do not know the concept of pain. when I have to breathe each regret, each love I never experienced only to let pass me bye.
I added these lines I do not think I will stop on this write LOL
I will always laugh last
So who is crying more now?
Who,who,who? yes you
Now suffer in the cradle of my love
Now you feel my pain tenfold
Now you have past that threshold
I hope you die and suffer like I did
who will last laugh?
Oh sorry! that will be my love -
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Well I guess i just really understand this and I hope it lives on this poem and becomes more of a story told then a poem telling a story
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I agree man better to be a story than a poem
That's the way I do things you know me too well
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I guess we are just similar in that way. Every poem I have written ends up being a story instead of a poem telling a story.
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I just never post the "stories" on here haha I am too knew and want to read them first
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It would be the best way to be on here when you start off. to see how other people approach things as well as what kind of stuff wins the contests which can be hard to tell if by me. only being a couple of weeks old
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Yes It Helps and inspires me I hope to be writing soon though before school starts up again
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WOW!! This was heart wrenching.. to suffer at loves hand is hard to take.. Very deep and dark write hun!
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