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Never Ever Land

My body is slow to anger
As it takes abuse after abuse
Violation after violation
Passive, I wait for the pain.

I Do Not Wait Long

Pounding after pounding
Like a rhythmic drum
An African beat
Or counting numbers
Up and down up and
                D
                O
                W
                N
Eyes star blankly up
Relating to a favored donut:
G
      L
            A
                    Z
                          E
                                D

Gently, I drift
On a water stained ceiling
And tattered wall paper
From a happier time

Anywhere But

H
      E
            R
                    E

Ah, finally comes the overplayed chorus
The loud animalistic noises
That overload my senses
Those that I care no longer to try and Not hear.
     
T
        E
                  L
                            L

                  Me.

When does this drumming stop
This sick beat end?

Just how long until I break-
And there are two strangers
                  In my
                      B
                      E
                      D
                      ?





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By Gloria Chan

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  • ListentotheSilence
    September 16

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    This is insightful and really puts you right there in the room, feeling everything that she is feeling. You can sense fear even though it is not mentioned in the poem. This is a nice job...is it something you empathized with and wrote a poem about?
    It didn't really happen, did it?
    your overly concerned cousin,
    Lucy