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The Adventures of Fruits.

While getting held at the farmers market
I had said I felt peachy, but I am a grape.
That was the day when the pear and I met.
He told me the most exciting stories.
My favorite was when he hopped out his bag

Just so he could stay with me.

 

He said that I was his best friend.

Suddenly the lady put me inside her pouch.

I'm afraid this could be the end!

"What do I do pear to save myself?"

He replied "Just bounce out like I" 

Then once I tried,I was really surprised.

Because grapes are sadly stuck to there vines!

I screamed "I can't move"

The pear had a gasp.

"AAAHHH What do I do!?!?!"

 Pear screamed  "We'll both be trapped!"

 

10 minutes later we were in A sink

And then...ugh.

Sorry it was all a flash. It's hard to think 

Then this 15 year old kid got dared 

To eat a whole entire pear 

In one single bite.

He thought its was funny so he did.

Then a girl about 9

picked me and swollowed me

Without a single chew.

Pear and I tried break free.

Now together in the comode are we. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm 11 years old. Enjoy

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  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 8
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    I would like to be a pear, but i think maybe not!!
    Good imagery in this.
    Joe

  • Very clever and cute... I never really took time to conceive the angst of fruit when taken on such a treacherous journey. You have imagined it well. Lots of fun to read!