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Muse

Beautifully, dangerous muse
Burning against my soul
Words you twist and confuse
as I lose total control

See everyone wants you
creative fires you light
I want what I am due
inspire me to write

Author notes

short and sweet but listening to the song This is what I came up with

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • mgmc gold member
    September 17

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    Have to agree with other comments -- I think your muse is working with you! Great write in eight lines. First line is very interesting...dangerous muse.....hard to tell where she might take you? Great poem! Enjoyed reading it!


  • trekkergirl
    September 3

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    ahhh one about your muse... I always find these interesting to read because you never know where one is going to go...how they feel about their muses. Good job. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 3

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    WOW! Sounds like your muse is haunting you just fine to me.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 3

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    Lovely thought for this prompt song! I hope that you do well with it and thanks a lot for sharing it with all of us here. Take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • Deaths Prayer
    September 3

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    LOL yes Jill that's the way to take it "inspire me to write" well done keep up the fire!!


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 3

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    Great job. It looks like your muse already has come to the rescue. I love where you took the prompt!

    Lynda

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