spring breeze
rocks the park's daffodils
and a dog's tail
Andrew Hide
03~04~2004
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Written April 3rd, 2004
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Outstanding haiku!
Wow!!! I would love to see this happen. LOL. I can see it happen in your haiku wonderfully. What a nice image! lol
This one is fun! I enjoyed the image and it's light-heartedness alot
Quite a powerful breeze that must've been. I can't wait for spring!
Charishma
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Lovely! Lovely! Lovely!
I am soooo ready for Spring to arrive and stay here! One day it will be 80 degrees, the next day its 50. I wish Nature would make up her mind!
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To yoopayumpa
There is some one in Alaska who likes to exchange. Dieing till he will be abled to write springpoetry.
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and that must be quite a Dog
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lol... I like this one. Must be quite a breeze though!!!
Don
his wind
moves flowers
my dog
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Nothing like a dancing daffodil... They look like they are laughing
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well written way 2 go
fun poem... well written though i am not looking forward to spring, Allergies, I will miss skiing and snowboarding. And sledding with the family. Oh and dont let me forget skijumping!
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Andrew.Nice word picture.I don't know why but your poem makes me think of the flip side of spring breezes.
Spring breeze
Through the trees
Makes me sneeze
or
Spring breeze
Makes me wheeze
Allergies.
And they rhyme.Pardon my silliness.Bill
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