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~Haiku #33~



fireflies flicker
within autumns sunset –
slowly my plane lands



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  • hperez
    September 12

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    nice...wow, makes me wonder about the duality internal and external congnitive relevance. does one lead to the other?? uhm...i definitely think this haik indeed proves that.