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You Asked Me What I Felt

I feel the unknown is going to scare you

When you reached the point of knowing there is more

You were unsure of what this new emotion meant

And how are you going to use it

My feelings showed for you down on paper with my pen

I'll tell you the names are different

But their better for keeping you at home with yourself

You can get all mad

Say out-loud I don't need this right now

And fall asleep

Or pick up a present pay for school and knowledge

Retrieve something from a superior colleague 

You will never think of stress

Stress moves you to go to sleep again

What a life

I hope you choose to live it

Experience experiences without strife 

Let your ember wings burn

You lit them for self satisfaction now that you have met up with me

Take them with you and succeed 

Just let life flow into your hands

Throw life up in the air 

Catch it in your heart of hearts not in despair 

Do-it Do-it get yourself to it

The God in you is waiting to be 

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Emotional Write For me

Prompt:

"Hell Butterflies with black ember wings,
Kissing your skin as Seraph Goddess sings."

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  • penman gold member
    September 3

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    wonderful

    Very creative and so well written. Congratulation on the honorable mention


  • Agrona
    September 3

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    (smiles)

    This was a very interesting take on the prompt. The flow and emotion danced here and brought me reading more. The metaphor of the wings was lovely and I enjoyed this very much. You did well.

    Thank you so much for entering,
    Your Czarina,
    ~Seraph


  • Deaths Prayer
    September 3

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    That was so sweet my soul sister let your ember wings burn great line that one you penned.

    Good luck in the contest!!