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Waterfall Dreams

Watch as images cascade
through waterfall dreams
Do not feel betrayed
nothing is as it seems

Spraying mists of emotion
as slumber unfolds you
Offering a little devotion
as you deeply pursue

Rings echo of true reality
pools of reflection deep
Hearts fill with spirituality
as you lay fast asleep






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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 9

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    Oh what a soft romantic poem you have penned here. Lovely imagery indeed. Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 3

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    You have an amazing way with words and folding them to make your imagery.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • toomysterious
    September 3

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    You give beautiful meaning to the prompt. You have creaed a wonderfully tranquil seen, oh, if only, we could all hae such dreams. Good luck in your contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 3

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    This is another beautiful piece! I love the imagery and thought that you put into this. Great work here and all the best to you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • awannabepoet
    September 3
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    A dream from which one should never wake lest the beauty be lost to reality.


  • Deaths Prayer
    September 3

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    The best things always seem to happen when we are asleep well never mind waterfalls are beautiful

    Great penning Jill i loved it

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