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~Within Your Breath ~

Now that night has passed
And dawn rises with the sun
I see the beauty of your face
In my heart know you're the one
Gently I press my cheek against yours
Watch you smile meekly in your sleep
As I closely nestle into you
Your warmth draws me into peace
Holding you close I rest in you
As one our hearts beat in rhythem
And as I lay within your breath
I am thankful for the love you have given



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JB

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  • Xxcant runxX
    September 3
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    wow great job
    love this


  • The-punk-princess
    September 3
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    awwww...

    This is sweet! I really like it
    You did a great job. I can feel the love in your words.
    Great write, keep it up


  • ceegeeess
    September 3

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    mutual breath is love!

    as I lay within your breath
    I am thankful for the love you have given" Breath is the divine gift for lovers to live in bliss of oneness. Eyes meet. hearts beat as one, breatbhe as one is named as being in love. Thank you for sharing, dear (E)mbrace!