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My sweet Tory Rose (For Tory)

My Dear sweet Tory Rose
so sweet and lovely and tender
not to mention how wonderful and caring you are

You have the most elegant blossom of all
and your petals are of the most beautiful crimson red
For You Tory Rose are the lovliest of all

Inside and out your beauty shines
You have a True heart of gold
and are full of divine love and compassion

If something happend I would be mortified
and deeply grieved for I love you dear one
You have blessed me more than you'll ever know

You make me very happy sweet sister of mine
and when you are happy it makes me happy
but when ur sad it makes me sad too

My dear sweet Tory Rose
oh wonderful dear sister
You matter so very much to me

So one more thing before I go
I love you dear one
my sweet sister Tory Rose

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For my sister Tory!!!!

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  • condor gold member
    September 11

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    This is such a sweet heartfelt write for your loving sis and one which definately put a smile on my face. The friendship between two can be measured in the smiles they give each other and the laughs they share together. It is obvious to see that you both have shared many of these and will continue to do so. An excellent write that shows us the beautiful heart that is yours. So well done.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    September 10

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    awww this is just simply lovely.
    i can tell that you sister means the world to you.
    i have only one sister and we are very close,
    she is truly my very best friend. we share secerts
    and we talk for hours unend about everything
    under the sun. so i can relate to this sweet poem
    of yours very well.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    joyce


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 10

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    Came back to read as promised, and i am thrilled I did. This is one of those reads you look over twice, and experience the beauty and the endearment within. Our Tory is a special person, full of grace, and to be known, to be known. She has a soft spot held close and she knows na hemeoone and myself are always wishing her only the best, Your words have echoed what flows within a lof of her friends, and for that I thank you.

  • Purrsanthema
    September 10
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    What a sweet poem!

  • Eusebius
    September 10

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    Oh, this a most wonderful and poignant tribute to your sister!


  • individuality gold member
    September 9

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    a smashing, super, lovely piece of poetry penned, ah to give out love and friendship, to smile and dance across the light side of fragrance, where the world is bouncy and smiling.

  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 9
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    bookmarked for later.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 9

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    Such a beautiful tribute. You have done a wonderful job with the love in this, and it is obvious that she is near and dear to you.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • penman gold member
    September 5

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    Excellent

    such sweet words you have penned. They are filled with love for your sister. What a wonderful and thoughtful write.


  • words-n-stuff gold member
    September 5

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    Loving words

    A heartfelt piece, sincere and loving to a cherished sister. Sibling respect of the highest order ! .... probably a rarity in this day and age


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 5

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    This is such a loving tribute for Tory, beautiful poem!


    whisper


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 3

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    Thank you so much.
    You are a blessing jewels.
    Always there when needed

    I love you as well

    Always
    Tory

    • My dear sweet precious sister I love you more than you will ever ever know!!! You are a wonderful person truly exceptional and unbelievable!!!! I love you very very much and I just want you to know that If I could be in Texas with you when u are sick I would stay beside you just like you did with Lilly and pray that The Lord would make you better because I need you my dear sweet sister and I love you!!!!!!! I might be there when u need me but I also need you!!!!!

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