The feelings come over me like a tidal wave,
Pushing me further down to the ocean floor.
I strugle to stay afloat, loosing air.
I keep fighting, splashing my arms around
Trying to reach the surface,
But the more I try the faster I sink
Being pushed further down by the wave of emotion
Struggling to breath, struggling to stay alive.
The weight of the water, of the emotion is a heavy burdern.
My chest is getting tight, I'm fading into darkness.
Lossing all consciousness I sink into the empty bliss.
A contest entry
- The Ocean by AnonymouslyKnown.
750 points, ended September 13, 15 entries
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Comments
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Lovin it!!!
You should come join my contest if you want that is lol. Havn't seen you look at any of my stuff lately got some new stuff up. -
very good.
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