Note to heart:
closed for repairs.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Flash Fiction by crivanea.
400 points, ended September 5, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments welcomed
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Yeah!
That's the ticket poet. Get the heart fixed for the next bozo to come along and bash upon. Fix it with titanium or steel. Good six here!
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agreed, titanium it is 
Thanks for the visit
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haha! love the personification you put in this piece! so full of irony..but such good wording! and very suitable background too nicely done poet...a wonderful 6 word
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Cool... How profoundly true...
Good luck with the contest...
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A~
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Sounds like this is a message better left unopened or deleted. I have never heard of flash fiction, looks easy. I guess thats maybe why the contest has 46 entries lol
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The trick to 6 words would be to speak volumes within them. I suck at it, but what the heck.
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I don't think you suck, rather I think that your six words are very loud
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LOL!! ..... good!
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Just don't start singing set me free
Not sure if I can bear watching the grim reaper come.
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