Through the suns and stars the world
goes round and round and round
all through the day
and during every year
the world rotates
And the world doesn't stop...
Until the end of our day
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By Jalen, age 9
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Brilliant !Bravo!
Jalen age 9 , Nine years and you seem to understand what some people three times your age hasn't even begin to figure out, Great job.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Jalen says "thank you"!! He is really excited about writing poetry.
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Very nicely done, Jalen. Time is an interesting thing... a big subject for someone your age to write about...you are a smart one to understand how we are all wrapped up in the movement of the universe. "The world doesn't stop...Until the end of our day."---I really liked that part best!
Great job!
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Jalen says: "Thank you for the comment! I got another poem coming"
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aaww..
this is very full of thought, wonder, and i found it fascinating! great job Jalen..
i enjoyed it..
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Jalen says: "Thank you and I liked your comment!"
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