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The Evolution Mind

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Evolution of man tells of life and time
but has anybody ever talked about
the evolution of the mind? The
bodies imperfect is you, But for
the mind that's not true.


The mind has a goal that it must
fulfill; that's why it's always present
and feels so real. Becoming
perfect is really the mind's goal-
the destiny of your soul.


The mind is on its way to a perfect
state, where all is real and nothing's
fake, where peace is a reality and a
place where the inner eye can see.

Your body falls but the mind goes on-
it's been that way since man saw the
first dawn. The same mind that was
in him is in you, heading for perfection
to.


You may think it's yours and it is for
awhile; and in the end it helps you
to smile. But here's the real story.
just for you. When the mind
becomes perfect, so will you.



So when our bodies and minds
are working together we all will feel
,look and be much better. That
will makes the mind and  earth
a peaceful  place And who knows
even death may disappear from
the human race .


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  • hoeftra gold member
    September 23

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    Man's Mind Window to God's Soul

    I carry a tag line at the bottom of a blog I write that goes something like this: "Nature, the Way to Know God's Mind; Man's Mind, the Window to God's Soul." Your implied idea of a "race" mentality, or that stemming from man's early beginnings as the same one ascribed to by some American Indians, and which was an important part of mankind's development from pre-historic times among tribes with lesser minds in which men of such memory were known as the Others.

    It is an intersting concept.

    So is the idea you present of the mind of man being that which is the source of a heaven on earth. ..."the mind goes on--it's been that way since man saw the first down." And could that mind not be where we find perfection in the end, placed there with the first breatrh God gave man.It is as you only hint here.

    But then a poem is hardly a place to develop such concepts. This is a fine poem in all that it does do. I Iaud you for it.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    September 20

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    Excellent

    The people who are suposed to know say we use only a small portion of our mind
    that we have powers we do not know how to use. I believe this to be true, but for a brain to expand it has to be used and so few people do that.


  • lovelifelive gold member
    September 6

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    AMAZING

    there will never be words to just I how great I think this poem is I hope that many read this and beas amaze as I was . Mind is simply smileat this piece "like yeah that right " Great poem


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 3

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    Amen

    I was told very young to be careful what you may hate for hate is finding you hate in others what you hate most in yourself . THis write is pure perfection for so true it is purity of mind is where heaven so entertwines . Great poem truly great