I have moved on.
I have abandoned
My earthly vessel,
The falseness of perception
No longer limits me!
All the knowledge of creation
Has been made know to me,
I have moved on.
Cry not for lost potential,
For the dreams that
Never had a chance.
I have moved on,
And my parting has been
In hope and exhilaration
For future aspirations.
Feel not saddened that my end
Came in the joyfulness of youth.
Know, in my parting, that
I’ve shed the pain and baggage
Of an earthly existence.
I have moved on,
Into the grandness
And the boldness of the universe,
And the confidence of one-ness
With creation, existence.
Rejoice for me, as I face
The next great adventure!
A contest entry
- If you died today, what legacy would you leave behind? by Vhoori.
700 points, ended September 12, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Feel Emotion by PurpleSky.
800 points, ended September 28, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very good indeed, something we should think every day, just in case it is our last
I will keep this poem so that it's wisdom may one day penitrate my soul
Just one minor correction, -
penultimate line first verse, - ''Has been made knowN to me
David
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I love the boldness in this piece and the way it stands not in the shadows but in the light of what is to come. Beautiful piece and a very enjoyable read. thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck to you
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Lena -
Very nice! It makes me think about what will be our next great adventure, and it makes me appreciate the strength it takes to be able to move on and let this life go. Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering!
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