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Wastes...

Wastes…
“He’s a pile of junk
From his head to toe”

In my life I have read many pages
Seens books behind words
Bathed into sweats, without
A water bath or a drink for hours

And yet all I have learnt
Goes Wasted,

But then I ask,

“Isn’t all the survival
Someone’s waste.
Are you not?
Nature’s waste.”

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  • Cannonsfire
    September 11
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    Something deep to ponder on here C