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Panda J. Hugs

Once there was a panda,
named Panda J, Hugs.
He gave hugs to anyone,
from billionaires to thugs.

One day Panda James,
took a trip to the bank.
But to Panda J's surprise,
outside, was a tank.

Commandeered by criminals,
threatening to kill.
Giant, empty money bags,
with money they intended to fill.

Panda James looked around,
as people hit the floor.
The criminals were expecting tellers,
they found something more.

A panda in a black bowler hat,
and a buttoned red vest.
Underneat was a green, silk shirt,
no less than the best.

The criminals put down their guns,
seeing there was no threat.
There were three of then, all dressed in black,
Michael, Packie, and Chet.

So, Panda James opened his arms,
and hugged them one by one.
And suddenly, all the bad intentions,
were replaced by hugs and fun.

So the criminals changed their ways,
and surrendered to the cops.
Panda J. Hugs had saved the day,
and well, that was just tops.

The End.

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    September 4
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    Very amusing
    I liked it ^^

    [sorry, my lengthy comments go out the window when I have a block as well >.<]


    • Dave-Joseph
      September 4
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      Thank you lotz! And itz otay, you is awesomenezz so that makes a long comment automatically from you, no matter its true length


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 3
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    hahahahahh! Your a funny one ^^


  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    September 3

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    That was amazing! You're so amazing.

    Once there was a panda,
    named Panda J, Hugs.
    He gave hugs to anyone,
    from billionaires to thugs.

    Aw.. Love those lines. Great job!