A wisp of cloud floating by,
In an almost clear, blue sky,
There's more to it than meets the eye,
A place where feathered creatures fly.
I dream all day, I dream all night,
In the moon and sunshines light,
When I'm out of peoples sight,
My dreams they make me feel all right.
I dream of dolphins in the sea,
I dream of horses galloping free,
I dream of a prince holding me,
I dream of me looking lovely!
I dream of my dog coming home,
I dream of giving her a bone,
I dream of getting a brand new phone,
I dream of living on my own.
Most of these dreams will never come true,
Most of these things I cannot ever do,
But as long as I dream, I'll pull through,
Cas' miracles can happen to me and you!
Author notes
Sometimes I do dream about some of these things.
A contest entry
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This was good. I really liked the last line because it is true. THanks for entering and good luck!
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Wow, still, I can't believe you are only 11. You write so well, I dream of nearly the same things...dolphins, horses, Just beautiful dear. Blessings.
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Without dreams where would we all be? You never know what life may have to offer, I agree with bluemonday44 don't give up because most of your dreams will probably come true! I hope you keep having amazing and happy dreams.
Love,
mom
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this is a wonderful poem. Well versed and a nice flow to it. Young dreams...Ahhh. Oh so far away...Don't wish your life away young missy, because time travels a lot faster than you can imagine. All you dreams will probably come true..Why not even a Prince....Dan
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This very sweet, nice to read. Keep being creative, with your work and you will go a long way. I am almost to the point of wanting to summit more of my poems for a contest. So far, I have only done one and I am not sure it will make it to bronze, silver or a gold. But maybe, I could be wrong. This poem you write, could be a potential for a contest. Take care.
Sandi
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